Chapter 2 Page 2
Before I post a page, I get a whole lot of critiques on it, from a whole lot of different people. One of the questions I got the most was – what are Steven’s motives? It was a funny question to get in the form of a critique. Why would I tell you that? Why would I spell it out? You’re supposed to wonder about it.
Doc V says
The droplets disappearing in panel 2 is a little odd, but…
[zooms in on the center of that first panel]
That appears to be a direct hit…I’m not so sure that spill was an accident.
All those critiques, and nobody noticed that. O O OOOOPS
None of the critiques noticed he did that to derail things? xD He’s pretty obvious about it.
I like you.